Every Monday Dottie over at Tink's Place posts a picture and on Friday we share a story to go along with the picture. The story has to be at least 350 words, give or take.
I'm a couple days late with those one, but that was because I forgot to actually post it. I was so busy this weekend with social events and being all social. Oh well. I actually had fought myself on which viewpoint to write this in. I couldn't decide between Andrew's and Coraline's. Both seemed like interesting views to write in. However, I decided to get outside the box and do Andrew's. I rarely write in men's viewpoint. Also, I thought it would be interesting to see how well I write a sex addicts POV.
Coraline (not sure what else to call this)
by: Carole Rae
He shut the door like nothing had
happened. Adjusting his pants he recalled what he had just done. Just
because he didn't feel bad, did that make him psycho? If it did, he
didn't care. He got what he wanted and he always got what he
wanted...except that damn crown. His damned twin brother was just
born 10 minutes before him.
Oh well, he took his pretty wife's
virginity and it made him happy; even though it was technically rape.
Like he said...he got what he always wanted. He waltzed right in
there, under the pretense to wish her luck and congratulations for
snatching up the most wanted bachelor throughout the kingdom. Like a
fool, she hugged him. He chuckled
out loud at her thinking it was safe to hug a man who was highly
addicted to the play between the sheets. From there it was a downhill
fall. He took her innocence and even made sure to leave a nice pretty
mark on her lips. People would just suspect a nervous bride just
chewing her lips until they bled.
He
stopped at the nearest mirror, adjusted his golden hair and wiped he
lipstick left behind as evidence on his lips. Once he looked
dashingly handsome again, he entered into the church and went over to
his brother to stand loyally at his side as Best Man. The ironies of
life.
“H-how
is she, Andrew? I-i-is she nervous? Is she h-happy?” Muttered his
brother with that puppy-dog look upon his face. That look rarely left
its station.
“She's
fine, Leopald. Just a little nervous at all the bystanders will judge
her dress. She was...I mean...she is very excited about being married
to you.” Always a hint of truth was spread over his lies. She had
been excited about marrying Leopald, but now that her innocence was
stolen by her wife's brother, she wasn't too enthused anymore.
Before
Leopald could say anymore, the bridal song began its tune. The
Flower-Girl and the Ring-Barer made their cute entry into the room.
Next all 10 of the bridesmaids came in. Andrew couldn't help but
imagine how many he would be able to get into his bed tonight. The
last wedding he managed to seduce two and raped one. What a life.
The
moment everyone had been waiting for arrived, the lovely Princess
Coraline made her way. Leopald stopped breathing when he seen how
lovely his future wife. However, Andrew held a very smug look on his
face. He couldn't help it. However, once Princess Coraline walked
closer everyone could see her perfect face was blemished by a chewed
lower lip and puffy red eyes. Her cheeks were red and she seemed
extremely nervous. More so than normal.
Luckily
he was smart enough to threaten her not to breathe a word of what
happened to anyone, including Leopald, because he would have her
family hunted down and killed. He could only dream of having that
type of power. Leopald was smarter than he looked, because he had all
sort of power removed when Andrew got a slap on the wrist for raping
a serving girl. So much restriction came out of that. Only Leopald
was allowed to approve any money given to him and where he was going.
To Andrew's luck, Princess Coraline didn't know of such restrictions,
no one really did. No one but Andrew, Leopald, and the treasurer. He
just hoped it would stay like that.
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<3CaroleRae
7 comments:
Arghhh *stabs Andrew* I hate him!!!!
A really good flash! How you made me hate that smug effing bastard
What a sad story!!!! But very well written!!!
B, I know! Andrew is an SOB and I hope Leopald finds out what he did to his wife. But I'm glad this story envoked some sort of passion. lol
Allison, thanks!
Owwww, that man needs to be put in his place.. Or whipped would be good. Great flash!
He sure does!
Wow, he's a nasty man!
Yeaaah, he's probably the biggest a-hole I've ever written about
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