Saturday, February 8

Untitled Emotions by Carole Rae

As you know I like writing. I found this "untitled" document when I was organizing my folders and etc. I didn't recall writing this, but I looked at the properties and it said it was nearly a year ago that I wrote this. It's just a small little poem. :)

Untitled Emotions
by: Carole Rae


Burning like fire
Veins clustered with ice.
Heart thumping.
Mind racing.

Nerves held on by a wire.
Love is an odd device.
Jealousy is lumping
In my throat, suffocating.

6 comments:

Blodeuedd said...

Very good Carole :)

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Carole Rae said...

*blushes* Thank you. :D

carol said...

I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Giselle said...

That's awesome! I suck at writing poetry so it always amazes me how creative people can be with them!

Carole Rae said...

Carol, thanks for liking it!

Giselle, awwe thanks. I don't know why but I've always like writing poetry and etc.